Some feedback that was given back to my group about our plot outline was adding more detail to the characters personality. Throughout the story the main character will be asleep most of the time, so to show her personality we will use her environment. The main characters bedroom will show her personality.
Another comment we received about our plot was asking why we used the hour 3 a.m. We used this hour because it is believed to be the devil’s hour, where the supernatural events and entities are thought to be their most powerful. Using this hour in our film can add to the story, hinting to the audience that something bad is going to happen, or something is not right.
Carolina Torres 